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I woke up late last night
To find you next to me-
Holding on as lovers do
For all the world to see

To think that in so long-
You'd finally returned
As if you were a blessing
That I have finally earned

So long I've waited for this-
So long you've been away
But now you're in my arms-
This time, in plans to stay

For once it all feels right,
Everything is as it seems-
Next, I wake to find you gone-
You were only in my dreams

In reality you're not here-
You're too far away to see-
You're everything I ever wanted
But, you don't belong to me

Never in my life-
Had I awakened so alone
Stranded in a misery
That I had never known

I wish that I could sleep forever-
Please tear me at the seam,
Maybe then I could be with you
With an eternity to dream
©2009-2010 ~NekoBattousai
:iconnekobattousai:

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A poem inspired by a dream I had a few nights ago.

It doesn't make much sense... but eh... I like it anyway.

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:iconspetsnazsv-98:
I can relate.

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... and if there's something wrong, who would have guessed it?
:icontenshi-kurama:
Sorry that you had that kind of dream *hug*

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>I liked Vampires Before Eclipse
>98% of teens would be dead if Twilight said breathing wasn't cool. Post this if you are apart of the 2% laughing.
:iconnekobattousai:
tis okay... The poem made me feel better >.<

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Zahra: KAZE!! :glomp:
Kaze: Wha? Oof! *is tackled*

Who's Your Danna?!

Sorry Cloud: tall, dark, and handsome beats short, blonde, and emo. Every time.
:iconazrael-neko:
I understand it because I can ratlate to the poem in a way. Love it :hug:

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I'm not scared Cause I know there's something out there waiting for me And I swear That I'll find it someday Just wait and see
I don't care that you call me crazy.
:iconnekobattousai:
YAY! Someone understands these messed up thoughts of mine :3

I admit that the poem is extremely cheesy when it starts off-- I wanted to express what I saw and felt in that dream, but sadly when I needed them the most, the right words seemed to fail me.

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Zahra: KAZE!! :glomp:
Kaze: Wha? Oof! *is tackled*

Who's Your Danna?!

Sorry Cloud: tall, dark, and handsome beats short, blonde, and emo. Every time.
:iconpananauyu:
"Next, I wake to find you gone-
You were only in my dreams

In reality you're not here-
You're too far away to see-
You're everything I ever wanted
But, you don't belong to me".

Amazing sentence.
:iconladyofrandomness:
So beautiful and so sad. :( I love it though... I can definitely relate...

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Put on your brave face
Hide your tears from the world
Make them all think
That you're just another girl

-coughfollowmeontwittercough- [link]

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